Tuesday 16 April 2013

story telling.....


At first Rahul thought it was a joke. Speeding down the country road the crude sign was only a blur. But it was that one
word. Slowing down, he swung the Lexus onto the paved shoulder. In the rearview mirror, he could see it clearly. The sign
was tacked to a stick that was stuck in the ground just beyond the paved shoulder. Shifting the powerful car into reverse,
Rahul jammed the accelerator down. The tires squealed and loose gravel flew as he tore back up the road. Screeching to a
halt, Rahul stared at the faded handwriting:

ELSWORTH'S FAMOUS
SPIDER PETTING ZOO
5Ms Next RT

Spiders fascinated Rahul. One summer, when he was eight, a large gold and black spider had taken up residence underneath
the shingles by the back door. Every morning, Rahul would gather up ants in a jar from a nest in the scrubby woods behind
his house. One by one, he would drop the wriggling insects into the web. With lightning speed, the spider would spring
from her hiding place and race towards the victim. Sinking her fangs into the ant, she would retreat, waiting for the poison
to take effect. When the ant slowly stopped struggling, she would climb back down and delicately wrap her prey in a
white shroud. This continued until, one day, his mother caught him. "What a cruel little boy you are," she scolded between
clenched teeth as she pummeled his backside. He could still feel the shame of being spanked. Years later, in a rare moment
of remorse, Rahul wondered what it was like for the ant. Trapped…helpless…waiting for the spider to return. Did they
know fear or horror? Or was that something only humans experienced? The insect brain was too small he told himself. Or
so he hoped. Five miles, thought Rahul, This side trip might only add another half hour or so to his journey. He would still
have time once he got to his motel to have a shower. The dinner meeting with the buyer from the supermarket chain wasn't
until 6 o'clock and it was only 4 now.

Coasting forward, Rahul scanned the road looking for the turnoff. About one hundred yards ahead, he saw a lane that
intersected with the highway. Flicking on his turn signal, he shot a quick glance at his watch. “ If I don't find it in fifteen
minutes, he promised himself, I'll turn back.”Accelerating smoothly, he turned onto a well-paved secondary road with deep
ditches on either side. Punching the buttons on the CD player, he stretched his arms, settling back into the soft leather seat.
As the throbbing beat of Queen filled the Lexus, his mood lightened - an unexpected adventure in an otherwise boring day.
Rahul hated his job. Endless meetings with bad food and balding buyers. Too many drinks and too many hangovers. He
was packing on the pounds, too. I have to get back to the gym, he reminded himself. The only redeeming feature of his job
was that he was good at it. Top sales rep for the last three years. “I should have been an actor”, he told himself. “Instead
I'm selling toilet paper and tampons to these turkeys”. As the needle on the speedometer crept higher and higher, the neatly
kept fields and freshly painted houses became a blur. Mile after mile slipped by. Rahul felt that he and the car had become
one, soaring along like a hawk on a summer breeze. But his mood soon soured. The condition of the road deteriorated.
Asphalt gave way to chip-seal, which gave way to gravel; and, finally ended up as dirt.

Rahul jumped on the brakes when a huge pothole emerged in the center of the road. Cursing the delay, he checked his
watch again. It was almost 5. The long drive down the country road had dulled his sense of time. I better turn around, he
cautioned himself. As he studied the road ahead looking for a safe place to make a U-turn, he saw it. An old farm house set
back from the road. If it hadn't been for the pothole, he would have missed it completely. By the mailbox, a freshly painted
sign read:

ELSWORTH'S FAMOUS
SPIDER PETTING ZOO
OPEN YEAR ROUND
ALL VISITORS WELCOME

“This must be the place”, he concluded. Carefully turning up the heavily rutted lane, Rahul wondered what he would
find. “Perhaps one of the locals playing a joke on the tourists”, he mused. Tall grass slapped at the bottom of the car and

rusted barbed wire clung to rotted posts that ran alongside the lane. In the untilled fields, scrubby bushes had sprung up like
mushrooms. Rahul tried to imagine what the farm looked like in better days, but it was impossible. When he reached the
top of the hill, the farmhouse looked even more decrepit. Blistered paint hung from the wooden shingles and there was a
disturbing sag in the middle of the roof. What once had been the side garden was now occupied by tall thistles and a mass of
tangled timbers indicated the former site of the main barn. Except for the glass still being intact in the windows, the house
looked abandoned. Where is everybody? thought Rahul. In response to his question, an old woman dressed in a black skirt
and a woolen sweater stepped out the side door. She was gnarled and withered like the lone apple tree that stood in the yard.
Rahul guessed she must have been at least 70, maybe even 80 years old.

"What you want?" she spat. Turning off the CD player and rolling down the car window, he replied, "Is this the petting
zoo?” "That's what the sign says, don't it?" Ignoring her rudeness, Rahul continued, "Are you open?" "I'll get Jake. He out
back chopping' s wood."

He watched as she shuffled down a dirt path and disappeared around a corner of the house. “Charming”, thought Rahul.
Opening the car door, he stepped out. Despite the poverty, the farm had a certain rustic appeal which reminded him of the
house that he grew up in the country. But there was something odd. Something missing. “Where are the flies?” thought
Rahul. On most farms the low buzz of the black swarms was constant. But here there was none. Except for the moaning of
the wind, it was quiet. Perhaps it was the lack of animals, he thought. Or maybe it was the stiff breeze at the top of the hill
that kept them at bay.

Glancing at his watch, he frowned. It was after 5 o'clock. If he did not get back on the road soon, he would be late for
his appointment. Either that or skip his shower. After driving all day, Rahul did not want to skip the soothing ritual. Taking
one last look around, he reached for the handle of the car door. Just then the old woman reappeared and behind her an even
more wizened up old man wearing faded blue overalls and a nicotine-stained undershirt. Stopping at the corner of the house,
the old man spat out a long jet of chewing tobacco on the ground. Wiping his mouth with the back of his hand, he paused
momentarily to study Rahul. Speaking to the old woman, he said in a low tone, "Thought I heard a car come up."

"Wants to see your spiders," she said before she turned away and went back into the farmhouse, letting the screen
door slam behind her. "You want to see my spiders, seriously?" "Sure if you're open. How much?". Looking over the
Lexus, he scratched his ruddy face and said, "Fifty bucks." "Fifty! That's ridiculous!". Shrugging his shoulders, the old
man said, "Take it or leave it. I got work to do." Then he spat out another long jet of chewing tobacco and turned to go. “I
can't leave now after coming all this way”, thought Rahul. Taking another quick glance at his watch, he said irritably, "All
right, all right. But this better be good!". The old man smirked and licked his lips as Rahul whipped out a crisp fifty
dollar bill from his wallet. Rahul did not like the old man's greedy look and hastily shoved his wallet back in his pants
pocket. "Thanks," said the old man sarcastically, snatching the bill from Rahul's hand. Looking it over carefully, he folded
it up neatly, stuck it in his pocket and said, "Follow me." The old man led Rahul down an overgrown path to a shed at the
back of the farmhouse. Inside, the dim glow of fluorescent tubes highlighted the dozen plywood shelves that ran along the
walls. In contrast to the rest of the farm, the shed was neat, almost antiseptic in appearance. Sitting on each shelve was a
glass terrarium filled with twigs and rocks. In the case closest to Rahul, a small garden spider was spinning a web in the
corner.

"That's an orb spider," said the old man. "I know," said Rahul, annoyed by the interruption, “you know spiders?'

"A bit," replied Rahul. "I used to study them when I was a kid."

"I bet you're the type that liked to feed 'em, eh? Catch bugs, drop 'em in. See what happens. Fun, ain't it?"

Suddenly Rahul was uncomfortable. “How did he guess my secret?” he wondered. Rahul felt the warm rush of blood to his
neck and ears as he started to blush.

"No need to be ashamed. All kids do it. It's natural." Trying to change the topic, Rahul asked, "You been at this long?
…keeping spiders?". "Yeah, I been at it awhile. Most folks are scared of spiders. Not me. Me and spiders get along real
good." Rahul turned back to watch a large black spider in another case sucking up the half-digested slurry of its latest

victim. Trying to be polite, Rahul asked, "Bet you don't get many visitors here…being so far from the highway."

"Don't need 'em," said the old man. "This is just a sideline." Pausing for effect he added, "I breed 'em." Rahul looked
puzzled. "For the college," explained the old man. "They use 'em for research." "Does it pay well?"

"Good 'nut…Ah, they don't know squat 'bout spiders!," said the old man, spitting on the floor. Rahul looked down and
saw that a streak of the sticky black tobacco had splashed on his shoes. "I been doing research of my own," said the old man
proudly. "Spiders are jess' like any other critter. Cows, horses, dogs - they're all the same. Breed the best with the best and
you get the best. There was something about his tone that made Rahul uneasy. "You want to see my prize winner?"

Rahul looked around. "Oh, she ain't here. I keep her in the barn. She kind of makes these critters nervous. I can't say, I
blame them. Want to see her?”. The way the old man said it, the question sounded more like a challenge. Rahul hesitated.
He wanted to say no, but he could not let the old man see he was afraid. "Sure," answered Rahul. “What could it be?” he
asked himself. “A tarantula?”. With the old man in front, they went down a lesser-used path to a small barn behind a stand
of trees that made it invisible from the farmhouse. A shiny new lock on a rusted has yielded to the old man's key.

"I don't like kids messing' with my stuff." The ancient wooden door swung open. Inside it was pitch black. Rahul
hesitated. What was it that made him apprehensive? His mouth felt dry and he tried to swallow. "Go on in!" taunted the old
man as he shoved Rahul through the door. Stumbling on the raised sill, Rahul fell to one knee ripping his pants. “Damnit”,
he cursed. "There's a light switch ahead of you," the old man reassured him. "Jess' pull the string." The stench of moldy
hay made Rahul gag. "Where is it…the spider?" he called out. "She's in the back. You can't miss her." "Where's the light?"

"Right in front of you. Can't you see it?" mocked the old man. Rahul stretched out his hand. At first, he could not feel
anything. Then slowly groping the air in, he caught hold of it. Rahul's heart leapt in relief. But there was something strange.
The line didn't feel like string. It was sticky like a… Pulling the line, Rahul knew he had made a mistake. Something rustled
in the rafters above him and bits of straw floated down. Rahul bolted for the opening. "Enjoy yourself!" cackled the old
man as he slammed the door and locked it. "Let me out! Let me out!" shouted Rahul, pounding on the door. "Let me out, you
old buzzard!”. But it was no use. The dried-out wooden door was like iron. Pausing to catch his breath, his fists throbbing,

Rahul looked around. Slowly his eyes grew accustomed to the dark. What appeared to be a black chasm was, in fact, the
side entrance to the barn. “There must be another way out”, he thought. “But where?”. In the gloom, he could see that
beyond the entry way there was a large open space. And beyond that a boarded-up window through which thin shafts of
sunlight streamed. “Great! All I have to do is cross the barn, pull off one or two of those boards and climb out, thought
Rahul. Then I'll show that old man. Fifty bucks! He'll wish I had never stopped.” Then he heard another rustle overhead and
more straw floated down.

"Who is it? Who's there?" he called out. “ I'll bet it's that old man”, thought Rahul. “He thinks he's going to scare
me.” "Sure! You just keep that up, old man," Rahul called out again. "Let's see how much laughing you do when I bash
your face in." “But first, I've got to get to that window”. “Be careful”, he cautioned himself. “This barn must be full of
junk. Don't want to fall down and get hurt.” Despite the heat in the barn, he shivered. Licking the sweat off his upper
lip, Rahul slowly picked his way across the wide wooden-planked barn floor, being careful not to trip. Shadows of old
machinery and tools loomed around him. A leather harness that hung from the wall looked like a hangman's noose. There
was a peculiar smell, too. It reminded him of a package of chicken that he once left in the trunk of his car on a hot summer
day. It was the sickly, sweet scent of rotting meat. “Oh, gross!” muttered Rahul. “There's a dead animal in here”. In
less than a minute he had crossed the barn and was standing in front of the boarded-up window. Blocking his exit were
three boards nailed haphazardly into the frame. Either the old man was too weak or too lazy to drive them all the way in,
concluded Rahul. “I can probably pull them off with my bare hands”, he smiled triumphantly. The first board was half-
rotted and fell apart in his hands. Light streamed in as it came away from the frame. Then he shifted his attention to the
second one - the board in the middle. If he could get this one off, he could easily climb out. But this board wouldn't be so
easy. It was like the old door of the barn, dried out and as tough as steel.

Gripping the board with both hands, he began pulling. The nails squealed in protest and the board started to move. Only
a little bit further, grunted Rahul. The thought of throttling the old man excited him. “Just a bit further....another half
inch.” He could almost feel his fingers closing around the old man's scrawny neck...the eyes bulging...the tongue sticking
out. “Another half inch...!” Then it stopped. Desperately, Rahul yanked at the board, but it was no use. It would not yield.
“I need more leverage”, he said to himself. Balancing on one foot, he braced his other against the window frame and started

pulling again. The muscles in his forearms and back bulged as he strained against the board. Sweat rolled down his forehead
and into his eyes. “Come on”, he pleaded with the wood. In his frustration, Rahul did not hear the soft tap...tap...tap on the
floor behind him. Tap...tap....tap. Like a blind man with his cane. Tap...tap...tap. Then it was too late. It struck. The force
of the attack rammed him face first up against the wall knocking the wind out of him. Warm blood trickled from his nose
and ran down his cheek.

“What was that?” Turning around slowly, he could see, in the light from the window, his attacker. It was crouched
inside an empty stall along the opposite wall. The legs tensed ready to spring. It was a spider. No doubt one of the old man's
experiments. But this was no ordinary spider. It was huge. About the size of a pit bull, with legs that extended out three or
four feet on either side. Its eyes stared coldly at him. Rahul did a quick tally of his injuries. Except for his bloody nose, he
was unharmed. Perhaps the large size of the creature made it difficult for it to mount an attack, he conjectured. Possibly it
did not even recognize him as prey. “ Spiders normally eat moths and insects,” he reminded himself. “Not human beings.”

When he was a kid, Rahul liked to throw twigs into a web just to see the spider's reaction. Invariably, after pouncing on
the object, the spider would pluck it out of the web, turn it over and drop it on the ground. Rahul hoped this spider would
show the same lack of interest. From its vantage point at the other end of the barn, the creature seemed puzzled - unsure
of itself. Spiders are cautious, he told himself. “It's waiting for me to make the next move”. Although every fiber in his
body screamed run, his brain told him stay still. The spider was too big and too fast to out-run. “ I need a weapon”, he told
himself. Quickly looking about, he saw the rotten board from the window lying at his feet. It was about two feet long with
a jagged point at one end. “It'll have to do”. Slowly, he bent down to pick it up. The spider crouched low, like a sprinter,
ready to strike again. Rahul froze - his fingers only inches from the board. "Easy girl," he whispered softly. "Easy."

The spider relaxed, but not completely. Deliberately, it began to move forward. Tap...tap...tap. Rahul was amazed by the
creature's grace. Like a ballerina tiptoeing in from the darkened wings of a theatre, it was a marvel of beauty and design.
The body, covered by fine grey hair, had the look of velvet, while the eight legs that extended from the thorax provided
speed and balance. As it approached Rahul, the spider carefully extended one foreleg towards him. Rahul quickly knocked
it away with his hand. The creature stopped and cocked its plate-sized head to one side. The eight eyes looked like black
fists. Then the leg came forward again. At the tip, Rahul could see the spike-like claw for catching prey. It touched his left

shoulder. Through his jacket he could feel the sharp point digging into his skin. Rahul winced and stepped backwards into
the wall. But there was no place to go. Slowly, the other foreleg came forward. Rahul recoiled, trying to ward off the attack
with his free arm. But the creature was too strong. It brushed his arm aside, as if it was a piece of lint, and planted a second
claw into his other shoulder. Rahul cried out, "Help! Help!". Then the spider reared up on its hind legs, forcing Rahul to
his knees. For a brief moment, he and the creature looked into each other's eyes. It was almost like love. Then he saw the
six-inch fangs that extended from the head. Drops of venom gleamed in the half-light. He watched in fascination as the
cruel daggers arched high over him; then he screamed as they plunged deeply into his chest. Instantly, white hot pain ripped
through his body. Then it was gone. The spider had retreated back to the stall. Rahul knew that he only had a minute or two
before the poison paralyzed him.

“This is it!” he said to himself. “My only chance.” Ignoring his wounds, Rahul turned back to the window. Grabbing at
the board, he yanked and pulled, to no avail. Already the venom was having its effect. His hands were numb and his arms
felt like lead. Gasping for air, he threw himself at the boards again and again. But it was no use. He was beaten. Great sobs
shook his body as he slumped to the floor. “This can't be happening to me”, he protested. “It's ridiculous.” Looking back
at the spider, he could see that it still had not moved. “What is she waiting for?” he wondered. “Why doesn't she finish me
off?” He soon had his answer. Shimmering like a great overcoat, there was something on the spider's back. It moved and
undulated like a small wave flowing back and forth. Then a piece of the wave pulled away and dropped to the floor. It was
another spider, only a lot smaller - about the size of a rat. Rahul recalled that some spiders carry their young on their backs.
Horrified, he realized that he had stumbled into their nursery and it was feeding time. Another one dropped to the floor
and then another. Soon there was a long line of spiders slowly crawling towards him. Through fading eyesight, he saw the
first one reach his foot. Tentatively, its foreleg probed the air, until it found his leg and patted it. It was light and delicate
like the touch of a child. Rahul opened his mouth to scream, but no sound came. The last thing Rahul saw before he lost
consciousness was a spider tearing a piece of flesh from the back of his hand. Back at the farmhouse, the old man picked up
the whisky bottle from the kitchen table, poured himself another drink and plopped down on the ancient Lay-z-boy recliner.

"How long it take, Jake?" asked the old woman. "Not long," he grunted. "They aren’t et since Sunday." "Get a better
sign. Attract mo' folks." "Nah, the sign's okay. Anyway, we don't need a crowd," said the old man, taking a long, hard
swallow. "What you are going' do with his car?" she asked, standing at the window admiring the now ownerless Lexus.

"I hear young Douglas needs one for running' moonshine. Willing to pay a good price, too," said the old man."Won't
he ask questions?" wondered the old woman, pouring a drink and easing herself down onto a dusty couch. "Nah. He don't
care," snickered the old man. "I'll talk to him tomorrow. Meanwhile, pass the remote. Let's see what's on Dr. Phil."

BY KHUSHI BHAYANI
FSLE 3

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